More Things Said During Crit Session

Totoro At NorwesconFrom notes found while cleaning:

“I love the idea that you get so gothy and morose that you just become a vampire.”

“He could have legitimate powers once he starts throwing up spiders.”

“I didn’t understand the importance of the vampires.”

“There were a lot of places where the characters were just going somewhere.”

“Don’t sigh at me.”

“If everything is possible, nothing matters. Blow it out of the park.”

“There’s no non-stupid way of putting it.”

“There’s some well-intentioned fascist vampires.”

“There used to be a chapter entitled ‘Vampire Training Montage.'”

“I always like more detail as to which organs are missing.”

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Crit Session Quotes for 12/15/2012

Kids Self PortraitsWelcome to new members Jei Marcade and Rachel Sobel!

We critted stories from Huw Evans, Caren Gussoff, and Tod McCoy. Here’s a scattering of what was said, but by request I have not attributed the quotes.

  • I found this exquisitely disgusting.
  • There are a lot of people with names.
  • Ditto Cat on wanting to be smacked harder.
  • Wow, you guys are really fired up about flour.
  • Land is really judgmental.

Crit Session Quotes for 12/1/2012

Image of a dinosaurWe critted stories from Emily Skaftun and Lily Yu. Here’s a scattering of what was said, but by request I have not attributed the quotes.

  • “We are not dissimilar from a blue lobster.”
  • “There needs to be more murder in the story.”
  • “Here’s MY version of how I would rewrite your story…”
  • “The manic departure from sensible decision making” (describing Seattle encountering a snow storm)
  • “The dinosaurs are such a great metaphor for love.”
  • “So I was like, fuck it, I’ll add some dinosaurs.”